Friday, August 26, 2011


I love to watch you

Take in the world

Close yet distant

Eyes wide

and Vibrant


Ever changing

In the twist of a moment.

Linking up for the first time over at Red Writing Hood.  This week’s assignment was simple: write a story of your choice. The catch? Write it as a tweet. Use only 140 characters – including spaces.


Galit Breen said...

Love the flow and rhythm here!

Cheryl said...

This is like a child, opening to the world.

Jenna said...

i saw it that way, too, Cheryl.. watching your child and feeling joy at their wonderment!

great evocative writing!

January Dawn said...

Thank you ladies for stopping in! I actually did write this with my boys, especially my youngest, in mind.

Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravy said...

This reads almost like a poem, lovely words and lovely sentiment! Congrats on linking up for the first time; hope to see more from you!

Karen said...

Such great pacing and I can see a wee one taking in the great world before them! :>

January Dawn said...

Thanks Katie - I sure hope to submit more.

Thanks Karen! That's exactly what I hoped to portray.

Stacey said...

Love!! This is absolutely beautiful!