The Dawning of January: Kaleidoscope

Friday, August 26, 2011

Kaleidoscope

I love to watch you

Take in the world

Close yet distant

Eyes wide

and Vibrant

Complex

Ever changing

In the twist of a moment.

Linking up for the first time over at Red Writing Hood. This week’s assignment was simple: write a story of your choice. The catch? Write it as a tweet. Use only 140 characters – including spaces.

8 comments:

Galit Breen said...: Love the flow and rhythm here!; August 26, 2011 at 3:19 PM
Cheryl said...: This is like a child, opening to the world.; August 26, 2011 at 3:38 PM
Jenna said...: i saw it that way, too, Cheryl.. watching your child and feeling joy at their wonderment!

great evocative writing!; August 26, 2011 at 9:19 PM
January Dawn said...: Thank you ladies for stopping in! I actually did write this with my boys, especially my youngest, in mind.; August 26, 2011 at 11:12 PM
Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravy said...: This reads almost like a poem, lovely words and lovely sentiment! Congrats on linking up for the first time; hope to see more from you!; August 27, 2011 at 12:09 AM
Karen said...: Such great pacing and I can see a wee one taking in the great world before them! :>; August 28, 2011 at 2:27 AM
January Dawn said...: Thanks Katie - I sure hope to submit more.

Thanks Karen! That's exactly what I hoped to portray.; August 29, 2011 at 9:21 PM
Stacey said...: Love!! This is absolutely beautiful!; February 20, 2012 at 4:58 PM